No,schools should not be year round.My opinion is that schools should not be year round because as Christopher Newland said that it is about as usefull of changing the color of a school bus.The text states that too many breaks disrupt learning that is good because if you have too many breaks then that could disrupt learning but if you do not have a lot of breaks you will get better grades in school.Most families plan vacations over the summer.Since most families plan vacations over the summer, year round schools restrict that so students cant go on summer trips.
Good job Max. Make sure to say the text states whenever you citing your evidence.
schools should not be year round.Most families plan long vacations over summer.Year round schools restrict family vacations. A break every month disrupts learning.With breaks it allows the teachers to focus on one topic for only a few weeks. Schools should not be year round.
You did a great job including your closing sentence! Whenever you are stating something that is found in the text you need to say the text states. Think about why it would be bad to disrupt learning. You want your opinion to be very clear.
Schools shouldn't be year round.the text states that that most families plan vacations over summer. Year round schools restrict summer family vacations.They don't allow students to go away to camp or take on summer jobs to earn money for the future.Students in year round schools have more breaks. They might forget what they have learned.
Andy you did a great job finding evidence from the text. You want to pick just 2 of those sentences and then explain them. For example you cited they don't allow students to go away to camp. Your next sentence should be about how it is important to go to summer camp to become a better lacrosse player.
SCHOOLS SHOULD NOT BE YEAR ROUND. TO MANY BREAKS DISRUPT LEARNING. IF YOU HAVE A LOT OF BREAKS THEN YOU MIGHT FORGET WHAT YOU LEARNED. MOST FAMILES PLAN VACTIONS OVER THE SUMMER. IF YOU PLAN VACTIONS AND YOU HAVE SHORT BREAKS. THEN YOU CAN NOT GO ANY WHERE. THIS IS MY REASON WHY I WHAT SHCOOLS TO NOT BE YEAR ROUND.
Bryce you did a great job explaining your two pieces of evidence.Make sure you write the text states before you use something directly from the text. Also do not write in all caps.
No,I think schools shouldn't be year round because teachers can talk more about one thing than many at a time. And students will forget very easily if they will have to learn a lot of things every three weeks. As you can clearly see I do not want year round schools.
Kareem you wrote a great concluding sentence. When you are responding to the text, you must cite the text. You would write the text states and then write a sentence to support your opinion. Then you write your explanation.
Yes,I think school should be year-around.My first evidence is students remember what they learn.It is important because than they get better grades on test.Another is teachers have time to better lessons.hope you inj
Good job! When you cite evidence from a text you must say the text states instead of my first evidence. It is important to give credit to the author. Remember to explain all of your evidence. Why is better for teacher to have time to better their lessons?
should schools be year round no they should not be year round because I woud like to have 64 days in a row sow I could play with my frinds an swim in the lake for along time an play pokemon go for 64 days straight and go to my cousins house an play schools should be not year around
Camilo you did a good job explaining your opinion; however, you must you reasons from the text.
I think that school should not be year round because even though we have a long summer break does not mean that we don't get other breaks. I also think that year round schools restrict summer breaks,but year round schools have breaks after every month to me that means that year round schools don't have any breaks in summer. Regular schools have more days in school than year round schools do because most months have 4 weeks in them so kids are only in school for 10 days.
Gavin you did a great job explaining your opinion. You did not include any evidence from the text. You have to write the text states and then write down evidence. Next you explain your opinion based on the sentence from the text.
I think schools shouldn't be year-round. Schools shouldn't be year-round round because most families plan vacations during the Summer. They plan vacations during the summer because in some places it is cold but during Summer those places get warmer and then you can go to those places like Canada. Also they can be sucsessful during tests because they can take a test before going on a break instead of studing during the break and teachers can spend more time on one subject. This way children can know a lot about one subject and stratigies like in math, reading, socil studies, science, music, p.e,french, and art. As you can see none year-round schools are amazing!!!
This is what I think about year-round schools.I think schools shouldn't be year-round.The text says most families plan there vacation over summer.My explanation is if it was year-round schools you wouldn't have summer break.The text says too many breaks distract students learning.My explanation is you don't have to teach it over again.So my point is schools schools shouldn't be year-round.
Good job! Next time leave out my explanation is. You can just write you don't have to teach it over again.
No,schools should not be schools should not be year round because text states breaks disrupt learning.they would forget because when its a break they would forget all about school. They would never remember.Text also says you get more time on one topic. In the middle of a topic they don`t have a break.So, I see you have seen my point,thank you.
Good job! We are going to work on transitions so your writing is smoother.
Schools should not be year round
The text states that most families plan there vacations in the summer
I think people should be able to spend time with their friends & families always
In text it states that schools with long breaks work just fine
I think it works fine because each week you learn something new
And that is why i think we should not have year-round schools
Good job! When you write a response you want to create a paragraph. Next time do not skip to the next line when you finish a sentence.
NO! Schools should not be year-round. The text states that too many breaks disrupt learning. So if you are in the middle of learning something you get a break and you might forget what you learned. the text also states that students should be able to enjoy there summer fully. if children are tired they get a break but it is to frequent it is better when you enjoy it fully. So you can see why schools should not be year-round.
Good job Zuri! I like your explanations. The sentence about children are tire they get a break but it is too frequent is not clear to the reader what you mean.
school shouldn't be year-round. School should not be year-round
because schools that are not year-round get to rest on the weekends.And they
are successful on remembering what the have learned.the text states students with to long break will disturb learning.The breaks allow teachers to focus on one topic for a few weeks.
Most family's plan vacations over summer.
They also don't allow student to go away to camp
or take on summer jobs to earn money for later on.
''Schools should not be Year-Round.'' Schools should not be Year-Round because students can forget what they learn over their breaks. Evidence: Too many breaks Disrupt learning. Year-Round schools do not allow students to go away to camp or to take on summer jobs to earn money for the future. Year-Round Schools restrict Summer Family Vacations. Students forget what they learn over their breaks. I think school should not be Year-Round don't you?
I love your ending! Instead of writing evidence. write the text states. You will write only one of those reasons, and then you will explain it.
No schools should not be year round because the text states most families plan vacitions over the summer. Students overthe summer go to camp and in year round schools they dont have time to go to camp because they are at school.
The text states in schools with a long summer break,lessons arenot broken up in frequent breaks. In schools that are not year round teachers spend more time on one topic.
Kinley you did a fantastic job explaining your evidence. Don't forget to include a concluding sentence.
yes schools should be year --round frequent breaks are good for stud
Nwamara you need to finish your response.
no school should not be year round. the text states that most familes plan vacation at summer.they like to have a long break to have a long trip.to many breaks disrupt learning.so you don't learn as much at the end of the year.
Good job explaining your evidence. Remember to capitalize the beginning of all sentences.
I think schools shouldn't be year round because instead of three weeks off we can have two days off. The text states that the students are still successful in tests. A long summer break is better. This is why I think schools shouldn't be year round.
I like your concluding sentence. Make sure you explain your evidence. When you wrote the text states students are just as successful on tests, your next sentence should tell me why that is important.
I think schools shouldn't be year round. Kids forget what they learn over to many breaks. They learn a topic but then they forget it. Each state has a test for moving on to the next grade if they forget they will fail Families plan vacations over summer in year round schools they don't have time for them. The text states that not year round schools work just fine. Year round schools teachers don't have time to focus on one topic. Now that you see my point school shouldn't be year round.
Wyatt you wrote a great concluding sentence! You included a lot of text evidence. Next time pick just 2 examples from the text and explain those more thoroughly.
Write something about yourself. No need to be fancy, just an overview.